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[Pube Comedy]

not bad... but more animation required!

half of the commedy material you used was funny heh... the other one was filled with excessive 'colorful' language.. i'm talking like, every 2nd word being a swear word - wasn't really necessary... you need to animate 'pube muppet' more - make him/her/it do more stuff like at the least get the mouth moving and sync it in with him telling jokes & stuff; it's the flash portal, not the audio portal... it get's boring watching it, that's all - just constructive criticism

Coleslaw-clock responds:

wtf ? what are you like 50 ?...sorry I don't like parents who whine about it if they're kids watch some curse words cartoons...that's lame.And animation on "pube muppet" the character isn't required, he should not be animated.

[2 dudes part 2]

great sequal!! funny stuff

haha great sequal.. even funnier than your first! this stuff is golden mann; "come back jeremy, it was only a joke.. " - "just leave me alone" haha
it's funnier 'coz it's true! well if you were still in the 2nd grade of school, that is... i like how you retained the roughly sketched outer lines of the character's you drew, and the - at times, screechy audio voices... great style, originality, and simplicity, - whilst still being able to be sooo funny.. can't wait for the next sequal!? are ya' gonna' make another one?! Great job, & great work indeed.

mr-wheatley responds:

thanks!

[tree loving]

a bit short, but still... good flash & good job!

haha simple, yet funny humour material... a bit brief though, but pretty good for it's file size i guess! your animation frame sequences were a bit off & choppy... i guess that contributed to the small file size, you might wanna' polish your animation skill'z in the near future... good luck to you on that; sound effects would have been alright, like the door opening/closing and foot steps etc... the drawings were alright looking, the clocks were drawn well - their voices sounded spot on too... nice twist of humour at the end, funny stuf haha they were smiling and hugging each other from behind.. good job mann, i look forward to reviewing future clock flash projects by you, longer i hope!

TrihornClock responds:

thx

[Caring With Cartman]

great job - South Park is cool mann!

as the previous reviewer already mention'd... nice job in re-creating Cartman! the pre-loader had clean-cut loop animation'z, well done - it looked nice, and from there i could tell this was gonna' be an above average decent scoring submission heh...nice 'feminine' introductory atmosphere you presented, funny shit haha with the music and smiley face crap.. i was like HEY that's not Cartman!.. aww you shoulda' made it so he couldn't open the chips, it's funny when he get's all pissed .. but great job with the animation - it was smooth as, the drawing was like a carbon copy of an actual South Park episode, it was great!.. hope you can make an episode out of this!? i would look forward to it... good job mann

Mek1985 responds:

Yeah I was actually considering that...like taking maybe a 1-3 minute sound clip from the show and animating it myself...meh...maybe someday. Fank you anyways :-)

[Pikmin Must Die!]

i like, i like - is this gonna' be a series?

haha funny stuff... nicely presented flash there - couldn't exactly understand what that psycho guy with the gun was saying to himself but *shrugs*...still funny, in a childish way! great emphasis with the children xylophone music loop in the background as well! nice sound elements... great visuals with him shooting the gun - nice & simple, i like your drawing style.. basic but lot's of style & flare.. nice frame sequences too, smooth as man - great animation... and how many freakin' bullets did that guy have in the gun ?!! a fair bit aye ! haha you'd think they would be dead after the first 3 shots... nice work with the gun sound effect too... is this gonna' be a series ? would be cool... great job!

4O4Error responds:

Yeah, I think doing a sequal would be great! I had alot of fun makeing this one and I banged it out in a few hours. The next one will be more in depth and ill spend more time on the visuals for sure.

Thanks!

[Gohan SSJ2]

another great DBZ parody...

i liked the animation & sound loop you presented at the loading screen.. nice artwork mann, great job of drawing those free-handed! however you need to take out this brief silent pause in the sound loop you used. or watever it is, but other than that pretty good! .. the introduction was pretty quiet, any scene without music or effects for a number of seconds get's a bit dull... but it was nice to see you added music during his gohan's transformation... it was pretty well illustrated - and in detail too, great job again on that! the visual's were pretty cool, i like how you highlighted the saiyan glow; that was well done also.. the animation frame seqences were smooth overall, i like your style ...great gohan tribute mann!

Blazed1987 responds:

thnx for the review, the sound loop pause too me about 1 hour b4 i notice i couldn't fix it, because it was in the track itself, and the scene with no sound is only there so wen the music comes up theres more excitment

[Navahls Anime Intro]

not bad..

not a bad constructed flash indeed... did you make up the character's in it ? coz i don't recognise any of them.. i don't know that much about anime though - great use of visuals mann, very nice how you sync'd it well with the background audio track... and the lightning sound effect... your animation was nice, the frame sequences were smooth and well polished.. i liked how you used the colour on your characters... and the writing in red that briefly displays from time to time match'd some of the lyrics being sung... that was well done there...i like the message you are trying to put forward with this movie clip, and your purpose.. not bad indeed - good job

navahl999 responds:

i figured out that th more simple the more easier to get it all sync'd ya know what i mean? but thank you, yes i did make karinosa(main guy), misao(main girl), and the bad guy (eyes), i have bios of them in my scetch pab somewhere, but yeah. im not the best at cool phrases but hey, pourqoui poi? im glad you liked it, its my first anime deal ive made.

[karate]

Nice twist at the end

... haha choice song mann; good ol' folk guitar music.. Go Cat Stevens!! haha , it's great how like there is all this variety of clock talent in the flash portal creating flash that has something to do with there Alias name... this flash was pretty well done overall! as i said before the soundtrack audio was funny az... the sound effects & elements were on sync and nice... the drawing's were illustrated pretty well also; the visuals & effects were inventive and gave a sense of variety, enjoyment, and adrelanine... the fighting was kick ass and a pretty cool concept.. the moves they did had style, the whole flash presentation had style!... could have been lengthier but it's pretty good - ohh and i like the twist at the end
Nice work mann

karate-clock responds:

I love you. :)

You pepole make me happy.

I never thought I would get such good feed back fora movie I made in 2 hours because I was bored.... :P

[SSM - Falling for flowers]

wow...

... pretty deep stuff there dude. You've managed well - to capture and convey a sad aura/atmosphere with this flash presentation... i haven't seen your other work, but probably retain's a similar theme.. of a deeper 'beneath the surface' level... but its genious how the simplest things of what life and our surroundings presents to us, such as a flower petal falling... can trigger such deeper levels of notions; of what we perceive as sad & loss... in reality & every day living... nice music selection - goes well with your purpose, the animation retains it's simplicity whilst having a lot of meaning as well... i like your style too, i like it how it makes you reflect and think... i hope this makes it through the portal, i give you my protection point
Great job again mann

Bob-The-Cheese responds:

cheers man.. i don't know if it'll get through atm... it's had 91 votes and is unter 2 it's liek at 1.87 atm :S oh well... it might make it but anyway, thanks for the review.

[The Key of Time]

Great!!1

That was GREAT mann!! That dramatic musical climax piece of audio never get's old... rev's you up and get's you all pumped !!1 The Clock Crew headquater scene at the intro could have been drawn much better though... as well as the tree in the scene also.... like you should have had the clock crew headquater's like a massive fortress..! and the blood could have been animated better.... and the sword slices as well - although i know this is probably a brief preview to determine what kind of response you will get, but that's what you should work on... it's about time someone made an epic battle between the locks & clocks.... this is like pretty similar to the Mythology flash that was on the front page earlier, and also had a Lord of the Rings atmosphere to it.. pretty good keep it up.. Hope to see a series and improvement of it

BMFMagnus responds:

Thanks. I planned the sword scene to leave the fight a mystery... and I'm not that experienced at animating blood yet. The fortress idea isn't bad... and I plan to hone my skills to a point where it'll be easy to animate. Thanks for the review.