HighDefinition's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MOTLB: Flower Girl]

awesome- needs a replay button

awesome idea you have going here - background audio was a 'choice' selection; good job on that! Sequence of events were, overall, hilariouss haha.. it was pretty funni how the guys ended up chasing them with like 4 of those running cycles,, if that makes sense? The ending was a golden bonus too hehe <3 iceing on a big fcuking cake!!1 you draw well too! looking forward to their next adventure- you have great ideas

ScreamingAlpha responds:

Thanks dude!
The running scene has a little referenceto scooby doo (the laugh). the cartoon that started all of that...i think. But they are well known for it, so i semi-credited them hehe.

and i'm glad people liked the song. Mostly known from dumb and dumber but i was slightly worried this would get blammed because of the type of song but it's going over pretty well.

[Billy the Smart Kid]

BILLY!!1 :-(

like the idea of takin' a before & after shot of Billy haha.. @ the after shot... looks like me on Sundays!!1 :-) The style is pretty good too (narrator & main character havin' a nice chat). done before but executed really well, in this case!!1 haha the voice acting is pretty funny too- but also the content material as well <3 Poor billyy those thick glasses didn't know what hit him. Graphics were drawn well too (yes the fat little frog too), if you were to touch this submission up though.. the sound effects of the vehicle colliding with billy's boddy was a bit early & the graphics look rushed during that event as well. Anyways, funny flash project overall-well done

Jag-the-cetra responds:

thx alot, reading your review was longer than seing my cartoon, so im honored.

lol I made the toons just for my personal fun, and the idea is nothing original, but I still like a big predictable joke when its well executed.

Thanks again!

[Lonley tree]

haha nice ending

yes i agree. the colour scheme is excellent & very rich - looks very polishedd. the lip sync-ing was on the ball too, nice work with that. The intro was very touching; very emo indeed!1 the audio was great & the whole 'sad' face on the treee.. like AWWWW haha.. the animals were a bit pointless, but i guess they were eye candy. i like how you built a dramatic atmosphere & lined up that last scene!!1 that was so funny & awesome haha!!1 kudos to you <3

CarrotLilFinger responds:

thanks im glad you liked i

[Sugar & Spice]

good

i don;'t see the relevance of the submission title to the actual flash content? *confused* anyway, maybe animate the sun more orange- so we can actually see the sun's changing aura.. everything else is find- find ur own style: simple visuals suit particular authors, while other's prefer detailed features... every1's got a preference. Both simple & detailed can look good, also depends on the actual content e.g. plot/storyline & compatability with its audio that makes it through at the end of the day. keep at it

edelion responds:

well its a mini tailer and there is suppose to be 2 shadows flying but didn't work stupid shape hints..lol. and it a mini series i am trying to finish..

[Deadass]

enjoyable!

this flash project looked like it was well thought out! the music & animation piece went together real well - goodchoice in both!1 pretty entertaining overall, the graphics were well polished as well.. nice colour blends & warm atmosphere~! sound effects sync'd pretty well with what was going on.. plot was rather inventive too.. funny concept indeed hehe. good job, you should make more-perhaps a sequal?

Syncy responds:

thanks a lot for the constructive criticism man, there's a lot of dweebs on here that just put you down. It's funny you mentioned a sequel because I'm just finishing it up now. This one is just as good for smoothness and music, but it's not stick people! Check it out soon!

[Drawing Zombietown]

original!

Strengths: the style & demonstration of 3D points of view was very appealing to me. The 'construction' music was great too,.. from FF? nice. The red lines featured were a nice addition - how they represented erasement. It seems that 3D works may be appreciated more from ur educational submission hehe.. the colour was pretty good too with the simple zombie drawings - lookd polished

Weaknesses: you let the 'psycho' audio cut a bit short.. ya' know the dumm dumm... dumm dum... (end bit). The illustrations of the earth was stylish, but abit rushed as well. Other than that, no complaints at all generally- well done, neat project

- HighDef.

AngelofApathy responds:

I apologize for the cut on the shower scene music, it was the ONLY version of that song I could find on the 'net. I'm kind of unhappy about it too. =[

[mIRC Primer]

good orientation

Strengths: nice introductory orientation to mIRC - the sequence of help screens was logical & well ordered. The screenshots & pictures of the mIRC user interface were helpful as well, and will probably help viewers understand your primer & featured content. Most explanations are also concise & straight to the point. Finally, the simple user commands you made available were quite useful.

Weaknesses: the use of more colour would greatly enhance ur presentation - perhaps distinguishing main headings from content material. A graphically rich background would be beneficial as well - but of course not one of those Megabyte expending fancy backgrounds.. ya' kno hehe.. To further polish off ur presentation - perhaps adding a fancy menu with more detailed menu's would do the trick. How about sound effects as well? Anyway, Looking forward to further installments of more advanced commands- maybe the basics of Remote scripts & F key Alias'- good job

Forteblast responds:

Thanks for the tips. I'm well aware of the weaknesses - I just wanted to see if anyone thought this was any good before I wasted too much more time spiffing it up. I'll add the neat little menus and graphics and sound effects and stuff (maybe narration, too) later. Right now, I'm focusing on content. Scripting and aliases are next!

[Revenge : Not So Sweet?]

meaningful

Strengths: you have an inventive style going for you in this submission - i liked the whole eyelid openin' & closin'.. what would of made it scarier if it was a 1st person view of the main character holdin' the gun & comitting the crime.. perhaps adding a bit of half-detailed violence.. can never get too much of that heh!1 The drawings are pretty good.. as well as the sequences of events; well thought out - perhaps the author is reflecting a personal experience? You got the music right & spot on... contributed to a sad/grieving setting.. lastly, you did well to dim the brightness in the scene where her Ex gets out of the vehicle, & the last scene gave the viewers something to think about.

weaknesses: this submission was simple & straight to the point.. but if you were to make changes it would be the detail of the drawings - but it's pretty good how it's simple - nice & meaningful flash you have here :-)

- HighDef.

Warrickneff responds:

First, thanks for the really good review! It helps when people honestly point out faults or weaknesses so I can improve upon them! I'm finding the music held the flash together, and that the different views also add alot to flashes!

It's all a new experience for me, and I'm hoping to make a couple more!

[Too much MMORPG?]

funni spinofff!!1

strengths: liked the whole introductory transitions - background info is quite appreciative.. found the engagement between those 2 lock character's enjoyable. It's funny caus' it's true lol'z. The background audio was well thought out & appropriate throughout the duration of the flash.. fast-tempo musikk was mint. Enjoyed the concept of this submission overall... once more, very funny

weaknesses: animation of lock characters was limited. Could be improved with more detailed fighting movements & the addition of visual effects. Eye candy is great for the eyess. Sound effects for the fighting moves & the whole flash would enhance the presentation as well. Good job overall, & happy lock day..

- HighDef.

EvilSqueegee responds:

Happy Lock day. Thank you for the review. Luff points for you indeed.

[Best Friends!!!]

some journey..

i'm taking a stab in a dark & suggesting this was a muck around submission.. i suggest a preloader nonetheless. Your drawings are decent & alryt.. but there was no purposeful plot/storyline for these drawings - the audio needs more definition & clarity as well.. perhaps, if these main characters actually undertook a journey, like the title said, it would be a more appealing submission. Sound effects would be beneficial as well. Maybe they can go to Smallville & help rid of the kryptonite for Superman. Or maybe you can make that guy's arm grow back in the sequal - like, that would be the best adventure ever :-)

teamtash responds:

maybe an annoying MIDI in the background will make it better...maybe a penis or two