lookin' 4ward to it
Strengths: the introductory music did a nice job - gave this submission purposeful direction. The colour + drawings resembled those portrait pieces you see in fancy art galleries & exhibition.. didn't give a way too little & at the same time didn't give too much, the sequence of events were just right.
Weaknesses: there was a very large gap of nothingness when it came to the main character staring at his Mrs.. a little too long. Sound effects would have made the viewing audience more involved with the story, although it is just a sneak trailer. Looking forward to more tweening & smooth character movements in your later flash release - goodwork
- HighDef.