lot of potential...
ya'... you have flash skill'z... pretty good short for makin' something out of boredom.. maybe you should be thinkin' about incorporating quality fighting environments & backgrounds as well, and work on refining visual effects... becaus' the fighting style & action is there... you should really, think about making a proper flash out of this heh.. it would be cool to see an interesting, thoroughly appealing storyline.. good work, nice flash
i love it! NICEEE
wow... you packed all that action in just around 150 kb ? that's an awesome economical file size mann hehe.. got to admire it, someone's done their homework ;-) ... i really enjoyed this movie mann... there is nothing better then randomality, and boy.. you getting drunk at the time did the job lol'z! .. senseless violence fun, fun.. you introduced to us a very peculiar character that seemed to be enlightened by the suffering and peril of others... quite an appealing dilemma to watch indeed... great job with the storyline hehe... gotta' love the pre-loader too! funny stuff.. it looked good even though the movie wasn't half loaded haha.. good stuff with the sound... the randomality of that guy mimicing to play the guitar raised my eyebrows... the blood visuals were kewl, and simple but still had the effect... the wiping of the blood off the camera screen, seemed to enjoy that feature... hehe liked the camera view transitions between what he was recording.. and the far shot. nice twist at the end, that is style.. i guess what i'm trying to say is... GREAT JOB hehe.. nice work keep it up
has a lot of potential .. nice work
heh.. should of renamed it 'preview trailer' or somethin' rather then episode lol'z.. ya' but i know you're workin' on it... and i must say, your off to a great start indeed! impressive visuals... the earth-shaking pressure that was sufficed, when the hero (i assume) made his appearance... gotta' love the kinetic movement of the surrounding 4 pillars as well... that swayed accordingly.. it was very well timed with the background audio track... nice selection i must say, adds atmosphere & anticipation; the song never gets old hehe.. you have a unique drawing style, i like hope you stick with it! can't wait until you put a good, thoughtful storyline to this - should be great.. great work with the flash - good luck!
funny caus' it's true ha... nice first flash :-)
hehe.. i can relate to he experience your characters were based on.. it's funny caus' it's true haha, funny stuff mann... the drawings & the overall appearance style is very nicee... the background music provided major atmosphere, and anticipation - which is good stuff... might need to work on your animation, but i think you're getting the hang of it... it's a bit jerky, might need to incorporate some motion tweening if you can't be bothered doing frame by frame... heh.. the content & material was funny overall... nice first flash - good work!
heh.. funny short, this series is golden!
got to admire that background... wow! looks so polished, and professional... the visuals are quite exceptional too! hehe.. the redness aura that overwhelms the background is a wicked effect.. and the smoke-work from his severely burnt corpse.. hehe a work of marvel indeed! gotta' love the ol' school "silent music" style background music... hehe even though it was short, it was equally met with a quirky and extremely funny storyline - straight to the point hehe.. me no read oh well haha funny stuff... love that material - keep it up with the shorts... this series is golden, great work!
off to a great start heh..
had a 'die in style' & 'battlefield' feel about this flash... if you're not too familiar with the flash's i mentioned, it's sort of like a stick death simulator flash thingy... well i mentioned it becaus' this was as good as that.. hehe the scenic background scope we are introduced to at the beginning looked exceptional! the frame by frame animation was soo smooth & very professional.. overall, the whole flash was well polished - loved the sound elements, they were critically timed; well done! hehe nice twist of humour and moral at the end ;-) great job
nicely looped presentation you got here..
that song was excellentlyy looped i must say! hehe.. took me a while to recognise it, could be coz' i'm half asleep now lol'z... great visuals! some of the 'ugly' pictures featured with the ladies and all. got me crackin' up a bit heh.. good stuff... i like how you presented the visual elements; the 'shake' & 'rattle' technique you employed with the text writing was good stuff... - well suited to the background audio track.. which was a pretty cool selection in itself hehe... good job & good luck with making a proper flash, hope you think up of some ideas
wow, nice visuals
wow awesome visuals! loved the visual effects and angles!.. very inventive, a marvel and a joy to watch indeed, whilst still being able to retain and recapturing the Xiao xiao phenomenon we all have been subjected to... loving the sync'd in sound elements as well! a privelage to watch indeed... the pre-loader was a nice polished piece of work, looked so appealing to watch even though it was still loading! the animation was very smooth-flowing... maybe chuck in some rev'd up metal music in the background for the 'adrelanine' effect hehe... dude hope you do a whole series of installments of this stuff, it's golden - great work mann
keep trying
nice lookin' preloader.. talk about giving the viewing audience false hope.. lol'z... haha and the sudden transition from the introductory 'night' background scene we are presented.. to a stick running endlessly in a bright and arid environment ? it was pretty sudden... it would of been good if you mentioned this was like some sort of preview, but i'm assuming this is intended to be a polished product.. the idea's there - just got to keep working at it, and yes it means not looping the same animation sequences over & over... and try optimising the sound ! it's critical, lower the quality or something.. this flash size is too short and very uneconomical indeed. Nice try
great first attempt!
hehe great first attempt.. i agree with the previous reviewer, the blob humanoids are a cool-looking and appealing transition from the regular sticks... stick to that style mann! awesome style... great music atmosphere you presented in the intro and during the whole duration of this flash movie creation.. made it very melo-dramatic, providing the viewing audience with much waited anticipation hehe... the voices were funny haha... but you might want to sync them more with the graphics.. the drawings were kewl lookin'... nice slow motion slicing... although it lacked detail, the slow motion effect added a 'goreness' to it.. sniper scene was great... you got a great storyline happenin' here
Can't wait to see the next series installment, nice nice work mann
Hey thanks for the good review...I can see some of the reviews are mixed but you give me more motivation to continue this. I'm starting work on the part II tomorrow, expect some improvement...I'm gonna read up on how to use my flash features and the movie is going to be longer....but n e ways..thanks!
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