thoughtful, artistic... deep - NICE
i like the use of the yellowish 'angelic' like haze... your first glimpse... and appealing conception of her.. only to realise that the girl you were confronting had an aura of darkness, - and an overwhelming sensation of sadness was experienced.. you were 'tangled' in your attempts to persist at fixing the doomed relationship, and ignored the 'flashes' (evil red eyes) that you swiftly felt, but took little recognition of... i don't even know if i interpreted it properly but that's how i did... great work, although i am sad of your loss, and sympathise with you.. though there are other girls :-) better one's that are less conceited... great imaginative flash.. although the addition of an orchestrated background audio & sound would of intensified the dramatic scenario you present'd... but well done indeed